What You Do To Me
Monday, August 07, 2006
I happened to go on a friend's link to see what had been happening. I posted some of my work on this community. (I'm not going to put it on now. You'll just have to ask me if you want it, then I'll edit this post.) Tell me what you think. This has been edited from the original poem by one word that would make a difference. Gosh! I make it sound like I curse like a sailor and I don't. Well here is the link to the original poem. Didn't I just say I wasn't going to let y'all see that? How about I just shut up and let you read it...
what you do to me
every angst felt
is joyous
every pain
suffered tickles
every torment
avowed seems caring
every misery
endured is serene
every sorrow
cried feels funny
what you do to me
every smile
curls angry
every laugh
cries
every kiss
seems hollow
every hug
feels empty
every caress
freezes cold
what you do to me
what you do to me
every angst felt
is joyous
every pain
suffered tickles
every torment
avowed seems caring
every misery
endured is serene
every sorrow
cried feels funny
what you do to me
every smile
curls angry
every laugh
cries
every kiss
seems hollow
every hug
feels empty
every caress
freezes cold
what you do to me
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Comments for What You Do To Me
Got to say that I like this version better.
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